Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with word choice and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct wrong words (tide → child, writing → riding), and use simple linking words to add details. Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences) and include one or two specific details (where you rode, who with, a memory). Also correct verb forms (it give → it gave) and articles/number agreement.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park near our house with my friends. Riding gave me a great sense of freedom and we often raced each other on weekends. I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without training wheels.

제안: Improve accuracy and coherence: correct phrase choices and plural forms (e.g., "Bikes are a popular form of transport"). Use linking words (for example, "because" and "also") properly and be specific: mention typical user groups, common routes, or approximate proportions. Watch articles, pluralization (works → work), and collocations (reduce air pollution → help reduce air pollution). Aim for 3–4 well-structured sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are a very popular form of transport in my country. Many people—especially students and office workers—use them to commute to school or work because they are cheap and convenient. They are especially common in cities for short trips and help reduce traffic congestion and air pollution. For example, I often see crowded bike lanes during rush hour.

× I had a bike when I was a tide.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The word 'tide' is incorrect here; the speaker likely meant 'child.' This is a vocabulary/word choice error rather than grammatical structure, but it affects pronoun/reference clarity. Replace 'tide' with 'child' to convey the intended meaning and ensure the sentence is semantically correct.

× My mother bought it for me when I was 7.

✓ My mother bought it for me when I was seven.

The sentence is grammatically correct in past tense, but using the numeral '7' in spoken context is unnatural. Writing out 'seven' is preferred in formal text. No tense change is needed; keep past simple 'bought.'

× I loved writing it to hang out with my friends because it give me a lot of fun and a reason of freedom.

✓ I loved riding it to hang out with my friends because it gave me a lot of fun and a sense of freedom.

Multiple issues: 'writing' is incorrect word choice; the correct gerund is 'riding' (verb + -ing form). 'Give' must agree with past tense context and becomes 'gave' (past tense issue). 'A reason of freedom' is unnatural; use 'a sense of freedom.' Combine these corrections to match past-tense narrative and correct word forms.

× A packs are all popular form of transport in my country.

✓ Bikes are a popular form of transport in my country.

The original has several errors: 'A packs' is incorrect—probably intended 'Bikes' (plural noun). 'Are all popular form' mixes plural subject with singular predicate; use 'Bikes are a popular form of transport' or 'Bicycles are a popular form of transport.' Ensure subject and verb agree and choose correct noun.

× Many people, especially students or office workers use them to commute to school or works everyday because they are cheap and convenient.

✓ Many people, especially students and office workers, use them to commute to school or work every day because they are cheap and convenient.

Several problems: use 'and' rather than 'or' when listing groups together. 'Works' is incorrect; the uncountable noun 'work' should be used for place of employment/commuting. 'Everyday' (one word) is an adjective; use 'every day' (two words) as the adverbial phrase. Also add a comma after the parenthetical phrase. These corrections fix parallel structure, noun form, and adverb usage.

× They also reduce their air pollution.

✓ They also help reduce air pollution.

'Their air pollution' incorrectly assigns pollution to 'them' (bikes). It is clearer to say 'help reduce air pollution' (general statement). This fixes incorrect possessive pronoun use and produces a natural collocation.