Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with tense and grammar, keep the reply natural and concise, and add a brief supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood, join sentences to avoid short choppy answers, and give a short reason or memory. Also avoid absolute statements about parents’ finances—phrase it politely.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents couldn't afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school or used public transport instead.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence then add specific supporting details and use linking words for coherence. Use plural agreement and articles correctly (motorcycles or cars). Provide reasons or comparisons to explain why bikes are less common.

예시: Not really; bicycles aren't very popular in my country because the roads are busy and people prefer faster transport. For example, most commuters use motorcycles or cars since they are quicker for long distances and more convenient for carrying goods.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question asks 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which is past tense. The student's response uses present tense 'don't have' incorrectly. Use past tense 'didn't' to match the timeframe. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the time reference in the question; for past simple questions, answer with past simple ('didn't').

× My parents can't afford to buy it for me.

✓ My parents couldn't afford to buy one for me.

The student is describing a past inability of the parents, so use past form of the modal/ability phrase: 'couldn't afford' instead of present 'can't afford.' Also 'it' refers to 'a bike'—more natural is 'one' or 'a bike.' Suggestion: Use past form 'couldn't afford' when talking about a past situation; use 'one' to refer back to a previously mentioned countable noun.

× Not really, bikes are not popular in my country.

✓ Not really, bicycles are not very popular in my country.

Although 'bikes' is grammatical, 'bicycles' is more formal in this context; additionally, adding 'very' makes the statement more natural. This is not a strict grammatical error but improves register and clarity. Suggestion: Use 'bicycles' or 'bikes' consistently and include adverbs like 'very' if you mean low popularity.

× Most people usually ride motorcycle or cars.

✓ Most people usually ride motorcycles or drive cars.

The noun 'motorcycle' should be plural 'motorcycles' to match 'Most people' (plural). Also, parallel structure requires verbs: 'ride motorcycles' and 'drive cars.' Using 'or' between singular and plural forms is inconsistent. Suggestion: Make both objects plural and use appropriate verbs for each mode of transport ('ride motorcycles', 'drive cars').