Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a fuller, natural response: start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and avoid one-word answers. For example, say what kind of bike, how old you were, and a brief memory or reason why it mattered to you.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six years old, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood with my friends. It helped me become more independent and I have fond memories of learning to balance without the training wheels.

제안: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitation fillers and repetition, pronounce brand names correctly, and use precise vocabulary (motorcycles, delivery drivers, apps). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and make one clear point with examples or reasons.

예시: Yes, I think they are quite popular. Many people use motorcycles for daily transport and as a source of income because delivery services like Grab rely on motorcycle riders. Additionally, motorcycles are practical in busy cities where traffic is heavy and parking is limited.

× I think yes, because nowadays a lot of people work with uh, motorcycle, uh, for example, uh, for example, like grab, they usually they, they use the app of crab to delivery the food.

✓ I think so, because nowadays a lot of people work with motorcycles. For example, delivery drivers for Grab usually use the Grab app to deliver food.

Multiple issues fall under the 'Verb + -ing form' category and related sentence structure problems. The original sentence misuses 'work with motorcycle' (singular noun and incorrect preposition) and 'to delivery the food' uses the verb 'delivery' (a noun) instead of the verb form 'deliver'. Also there is redundancy and hesitations ('uh, for example' repeated) and an incorrect name 'crab' instead of 'Grab'. Suggested corrections: use plural 'motorcycles' to match 'a lot of people', change 'work with' to a clearer phrase 'work with motorcycles' or 'work as motorcycle drivers', replace 'to delivery' with the infinitive verb 'to deliver' or present 'deliver', and use consistent phrasing 'delivery drivers for Grab' and 'use the Grab app'. These changes fix the incorrect verb form and make the sentence grammatical and natural.