Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but has many grammar, vocabulary and coherence issues. Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and article use (e.g., “I didn’t have a bike when I was a child”), use singular/plural correctly, and choose the right expressions for means of transport (e.g., “public transport” or “the train”). Avoid unclear phrases like “say money” or “back bike.”

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents couldn’t afford to buy one, so I usually traveled by public transport, such as buses. For longer trips we would take the train because it was faster and cheaper.

제안: Your answer gives a general opinion but contains incorrect word choices and unclear facts. Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then provide one or two specific, accurate details. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., “popular,” “common,” “motorbikes,” “motorcycles”) and avoid unsupported or confusing claims (Harley-Davidson is not the typical main transport in most countries). Use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

예시: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for city traffic. For example, many people commute on scooters or small motorbikes, while larger brands like Harley-Davidson are rare and usually owned by enthusiasts rather than everyday commuters.

× I didn't have a bike in my childhood instead of my parents are say money rather to buy me a back bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike in my childhood because my parents said they didn't have enough money to buy me a bike.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses and uses incorrect phrasing. Use past tense 'said' to match 'didn't have'. Replace 'instead of' with 'because' to show reason. 'Are say money rather to buy me a back bike' is ungrammatical; correct to 'they didn't have enough money to buy me a bike'. Ensure tense consistency and clear causal wording. Suggestions: Use consistent past tense for past events, replace awkward phrases with standard expressions like 'didn't have enough money'.

× Usually I went to different places on public transportations like bus or even if we in a far place I went to buy the mode of railway.

✓ Usually I went to different places by public transport, like bus, or if we went far I traveled by train.

This sentence mixes present and past and uses incorrect prepositions and pluralization. 'Public transportations' should be 'public transport' or 'public transportation'. 'If we in a far place' lacks a verb and should be 'if we went far'. 'I went to buy the mode of railway' is incorrect; use 'I traveled by train' or 'we took the train'. Maintain past tense ('went','traveled'), use correct prepositions ('by public transport'), and correct nouns ('train' not 'mode of railway'). Suggestions: Keep verbs in past tense for past habits, use 'by' with transport modes, and use singular/plural correctly.

× Yes, I am quite founded that bikes are the main source of transportation in my country and is very famous.

✓ Yes, I am quite sure that bikes are a main source of transportation in my country and are very popular.

'Founded' is incorrect; use 'sure' or 'convinced'. Subject-verb agreement error: 'bikes ... is' should be 'bikes ... are'. 'The main source' may be too strong; 'a main source' is safer unless certain. 'Very famous' is more naturally 'very popular'. Ensure adjective choice and agreement between plural subject and verb. Suggestions: Use 'sure' instead of 'founded', ensure verbs agree with plural nouns ('are'), and prefer 'popular' for things used widely.

× Usually the most famous Sanji tree bike of Indians are Harley-Davidson as it attracts a lot of attraction in the road.

✓ One of the most famous bikes among Indians is the Harley-Davidson, as it attracts a lot of attention on the road.

Several issues: 'Sanji tree' is unclear and likely incorrect; replaced with 'one of the most famous'. 'Bike of Indians' should be 'bikes among Indians'. Subject-verb agreement: 'bikes ... are Harley-Davidson' is awkward; better 'One of the most famous bikes ... is the Harley-Davidson'. 'Attracts a lot of attraction' is redundant; use 'attracts a lot of attention'. 'In the road' should be 'on the road'. Fix adjective use and idiomatic expressions. Suggestions: Use clear comparative phrases like 'one of the most famous', use 'attention' not 'attraction' in this context, and use correct preposition 'on' for roads.