Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện độ rõ ràng, ngữ pháp và mạch lạc. Trả lời trực tiếp bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn lý do. Tránh lặp từ và dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán. Ví dụ: nêu rõ bạn có hay không có xe đạp, lý do gia đình không đủ tiền, và cảm xúc hoặc hệ quả (ví dụ: bạn đã đi bộ hoặc mượn xe).

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or borrowed a bicycle from a neighbor. As a result, I became used to walking long distances, which kept me quite active.

제안: Trả lời rõ ràng và dùng cấu trúc mạch lạc với từ nối. Tránh lỗi phát âm như 'buy' thay vì 'bike' và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ở đâu phổ biến hơn, lý do như chi phí thấp hoặc giao thông). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu ngắn gọn.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas where distances are short and people prefer an inexpensive way to travel. In cities, many people use bikes for short commutes or leisure because they are cheap and convenient.

× Oh no, when I'm a try my family don't have enough money to buy something like buy school for me so I want always umm.

✓ Oh no. When I was a child my family didn't have enough money to buy things like a bicycle or pay for my school, so I couldn't have one.

The original sentence has multiple structure and tense issues. Use past tense 'was' for 'when I was a child' and past negative 'didn't have' for possession in the past (Grammar Problem Type ID 5 and 27). Also 'I'm a try' is ungrammatical; likely intended meaning is 'when I was a child' or 'when I tried' but context fits childhood. 'Don't have' should be 'didn't have' for past. 'Buy something like buy school for me' is unclear; corrected to 'buy things like a bicycle or pay for my school.' 'So I want always' is incorrect tense and meaning; corrected to 'so I couldn't have one.' For improvement: break long ideas into shorter sentences, ensure past events use past tense verbs, use correct negation with 'didn't + base verb', and replace vague phrases with specific nouns.'},{