Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and concise, correct grammar and articles, avoid fillers, and expand slightly with a brief supporting detail. Use a clear topic sentence followed by one specific reason or short example. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school, which gave me more time to chat with neighbours.

제안: Remove hesitation and repetition, use linking words for coherence, and give a specific example or brief comparison to support your opinion. Keep answer within 3 sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., popular, common, encourage).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many children ride them to school and in parks. Moreover, parents often encourage cycling to keep kids active and help them socialise with friends.

× No, I didn't have any bike because, umm, the the parent couldn't afford to buy one.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my parents couldn't afford to buy one.

The sentence uses 'any bike' which is incorrect with countable singular nouns in negative sentences; use 'a bike' after 'didn't have' when referring to one item. Also 'the the parent' is wrong: likely intended 'my parents' (plural) because affordability usually refers to the family; this fixes number agreement and meaning. Suggestion: use 'a' with a singular countable noun and use the correct noun phrase 'my parents' or 'my parent' depending on meaning.

× Well, I think so because a lot of kids now are are using bike or some of the parents are training their kids to be more sporty and more sociable.

✓ Well, I think so because a lot of kids now are using bikes, and some parents are training their kids to be more sporty and more sociable.

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