Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer repeated the examiner's question instead of responding. For Part 1, give a direct, concise answer with one topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and avoid repetition. Try to use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "own","ride","learn").

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in the park every weekend. As a result, I became more confident and enjoyed outdoor exercise with my friends.

제안: Your answer gives a clear opinion and reasons, but contains several language errors and some awkward phrasing. Improve accuracy (e.g., "bike" not "bug"), use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "so"), and be more specific with examples. Limit to max 3–4 short sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., "cardiovascular health", "exercise").

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, lots of students and office workers cycle to work, which helps their fitness and cardiovascular health. Therefore, cycling is a convenient and healthy transport option.

× Yes I do think bug is popular in our country cause riding a bike can improve our physical health and it is a kind of work out to improve our fitness and the heart and breathe.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in our country because riding a bike can improve our physical health; it is a kind of workout that improves fitness and benefits the heart and breathing.

Multiple issues: incorrect word 'bug' is likely 'bikes' (word choice not in list but treated as sentence structure), missing commas and conjunctions, informal 'cause' should be 'because', 'work out' should be one word 'workout' or 'work out' as verb, and 'the heart and breathe' is incorrect: 'breathing' (noun) or 'the heart and lungs' . According to the provided Grammar Problem Type List, these fall under 'Sentence structure errors' (26) and 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' (13) partly, but primary correction is sentence structure. Suggestions: use plural noun 'bikes' to match subject, use 'because' for formal reason, combine related clauses with a semicolon or conjunction, use 'workout' as noun and 'breathing' as the correct noun, and add commas for clarity.