Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, grammatically correct, and a bit more descriptive. Start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense consistently, and add one or two brief supporting details. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, mention the type of bike and a short memory or how often you used it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. I remember practicing until I could ride without help, which made me feel very proud.

제안: Answer directly, use comparative structures correctly, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words (e.g., because, so, therefore) and provide a specific reason and an example. Keep sentences concise and check grammar for comparatives and article use.

예시: Not as much as before. Many people prefer electric bicycles because they are faster and require less effort, so they are more practical for commuting. For instance, commuters often choose e-bikes to travel longer distances without sweating.

× Hi, yes, when I was a child I have a bike.

✓ Hi, yes, when I was a child I had a bike.

The question asks about possession in the past ('when I was a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Have' is present tense; use 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for past time expressions (e.g., 'when I was', 'when I lived', 'I had').

× Not really, because mostly people here use electronic bicycle than the normal bicycle because it is more way faster and easier to use.

✓ Not really, because people here mostly use electric bicycles rather than normal bicycles since they are much faster and easier to use.

Multiple issues fall under conjunction/structure and word choice but according to the allowed list we correct conjunction and related structure: 'mostly' should be placed before the verb phrase ('people here mostly use'), 'electronic bicycle' should be plural and better expressed as 'electric bicycles', 'than' with 'use' is incorrect — use 'rather than' to contrast choices, and 'more way faster' is ungrammatical; use 'much faster' or 'way faster'. Also maintain subject-verb agreement for the plural 'bicycles' with 'are'. Suggestion: reorder adverb placement, use 'rather than' for contrasts, use 'electric' instead of 'electronic' for bikes, and replace 'more way faster' with 'much faster'.