Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. “No, I didn’t.”), then briefly explain with one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid odd phrases like “born passenger.” Use correct tense and contractions appropriately.

예시: No, I didn’t. I preferred being a passenger because my family always drove everywhere, so I never learned to ride. As a result, I still feel uneasy balancing on a bike.

제안: Give a clearer, more organized response: start with a direct opinion, then support it with specific examples and a linking word. Avoid repetitive phrases and improve grammar (use “people of all ages” not “of any age people”).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many children ride bikes to school and adults use them for short commutes, so you see people of all ages cycling in parks and on city streets.

× Actually no, I am a born passenger and I've never tried having a bike.

✓ Actually no, I am not the kind of person who rides; I've never owned or ridden a bike.

Original uses 'I am a born passenger' which is an unnatural pronoun/phrase choice and 'having a bike' is awkward. Replace with clearer pronoun phrases and verbs: 'not the kind of person who rides' clarifies meaning. Use 'owned or ridden' to distinguish possession and experience. This fixes incorrect pronoun/phrase usage and improves clarity.

× Well, I've seen people or kids or of any age people are having bikes and it is obviously popular.

✓ Well, I've seen people of all ages with bikes, so they are obviously popular.

Original sentence mixes structures and tenses ('I've seen' plus 'people ... are having bikes') and contains redundant phrases ('or kids or of any age people'). Use 'people of all ages with bikes' to express the idea concisely and keep present perfect ('I've seen') followed by simple present ('they are obviously popular') for general truth.

× That's why they are having it.

✓ That's why many people have them.

Original 'they are having it' is incorrect: 'have' is the correct verb for possession, and pronoun agreement is wrong ('they' with singular 'it'). Use 'many people have them' to match plural possessors and plural object. This corrects pronoun reference and verb choice for possession.