Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify meaning and give a direct, coherent response. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then give one or two specific supporting details (who had a bike, why you didn’t, or a memory). Use simple linking words like 'but' or 'because'. Keep to under five sentences and avoid unclear phrases like 'I had a person'.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school. However, I remember borrowing my neighbour’s bike sometimes, which was fun.

제안: Make the response natural and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear opinion, then add two specific supporting reasons and a linking phrase such as 'because' or 'also'. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'common', 'mode of transport', 'practical'). Avoid literal translations like 'bikes are fixed'.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. Also, many people ride bikes for exercise and leisure, especially on weekends.

× Not really. I had a person, I think they couldn't just get them out.

✓ Not really. I had one, but I don't think I could take it out by myself.

The original sentence mixes pronouns and nouns incorrectly ('a person' and 'they'/'them') creating ambiguity. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and reference. Change 'a person' to 'one' (meaning a bike) and use consistent singular pronouns or rephrase to match the subject. Also adjust tense and modality to fit meaning: 'I had one' (past possession) and 'I don't think I could take it out by myself' (ability in the past/topic continuity). Use 'take it out' to clearly refer to the bike. Note: This correction follows the allowed problem type (incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12).

× Yes, bikes are fixed in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are common in my country.

'Fixed' is an incorrect adjective here; it suggests that bikes are repaired or immobile rather than widespread. This is an incorrect use of adjective. Replace with 'common' or 'popular' to convey prevalence. (This corresponds to problem type ID 13.)

× Not only it served as a hobby but also as a more transportation.

✓ Not only do they serve as a hobby, but they also provide an important means of transportation.

Multiple issues: the original uses incorrect sentence structure and pronoun reference ('it' unclear for plural 'bikes') and incorrect article/word choice ('a more transportation' is ungrammatical). Use plural subject 'they' to match 'bikes' (pronoun use, ID 12), correct verb form and subject-verb agreement 'do they serve' (sentence structure/tense, ID 26 and 6), and replace 'a more transportation' with 'an important means of transportation' (article and noun usage, ID 22 and 17). The corrected sentence uses parallel structure 'Not only... but also...' and clear vocabulary.