Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarifiez et rendez la réponse plus fluide. Évitez les hésitations et les répétitions en préparant une phrase d'introduction claire, puis une ou deux phrases de détails. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour la cohérence (par exemple "so", "and", "to"). Concentrez-vous sur la précision des verbes et la prononciation des pluriels et prépositions.

예시: Yes, I did. I often rode my bike to the parks near my house to play with my friends, and we would usually stay there for a couple of hours.

제안: Améliorez la grammaire et la précision du vocabulaire. Évitez les répétitions et utilisez une structure claire : affirmation + raison + exemple. Remplacez des mots inappropriés (par ex. "dispose" → "own") et utilisez des liaisons (par ex. "because", "for example").

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many families own at least one. For example, people commonly use bicycles to commute to work or go to school.

× I often. I often biked, uh, to park, uh, to parks nearby my house, uh, to play with my friends.

✓ I often biked to the parks near my house to play with my friends.

The student attempted to describe habitual actions in the past. The sentence has fragmented phrases and incorrect article and preposition use: 'to park' should be 'to the parks' (use definite article for specific nearby places) and 'nearby my house' should be 'near my house' (correct preposition). Combine fragments into one clear past-tense sentence. Suggestion: plan the sentence structure as Subject + past verb + object + adverbial phrase (I often biked to the parks near my house to play with my friends).

× It's quite popular in my country since all, all members of my family uh, dispose their own bike and it is a common, uh, It is common, uh, common transport, uh, to commute and go to school.

✓ Bicycles are quite popular in my country because all the members of my family have their own bikes, and cycling is a common way to commute and go to school.

There are several issues: 'It's quite popular' uses a vague pronoun 'it' while the subject should be plural 'bicycles' (pronoun/reference error). 'Dispose their own bike' is incorrect verb choice; use 'have' or 'own'. 'Their own bike' should be 'their own bikes' to agree in number. 'Common transport' is awkward; use 'a common way to commute' or 'a common mode of transport'. Combined, these corrections fix pronoun reference, verb choice, and singular/plural agreement. Suggestion: use a clear subject (bicycles), correct verb (have/own), match plural forms, and use natural collocations (a common way/mode of transport).