Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó đưa ra chi tiết cụ thể (loại xe, lý do, cảm xúc) và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như “had used to” (không đúng) và câu lộn xộn. Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g. tricycle, bicycle, nervous, prefer).

예시: Yes. I had a tricycle when I was a child because I was afraid of falling off a two-wheeled bike. As I grew older I practiced more and eventually learned to ride a normal bicycle. That experience made me feel proud and more confident.

제안: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi dùng thông tin cụ thể và liên từ để nối ý. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như “at now” → “now”, “I usually sees” → “I usually see”, và tránh lặp từ. Thêm ví dụ hoặc so sánh để làm câu trả lời cụ thể hơn (sự kiện sáng tập thể dục, cuộc thi đua). Giữ câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people ride bicycles early in the morning for exercise, and there are regular cycling races and community rides on weekends. Because of that, cycling is both a common hobby and a competitive sport here.

× Of course, yes, I had used to have a bicycle when I was a child and exactly is a bicycle with four wheels because I'm so scared.

✓ Of course, yes, I used to have a bicycle when I was a child; it was actually a bicycle with four wheels because I was so scared.

'Used to' is the correct expression for past habits; 'had used to' is incorrect because 'used to' already indicates past habitual action and does not take 'had' in simple past narratives. Also 'exactly is' is incorrect word order and tense; change to 'it was actually' to describe the past. 'I'm so scared' should match past time 'I was so scared'. Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habits and keep past tense consistent. ID: 9

× If I rode, I rode a bike with just too well.

✓ When I did ride, I rode a bike that worked very well.

The original sentence has incorrect conditional structure and word order ('If I rode, I rode...' is awkward) and 'with just too well' is ungrammatical. Use 'When I did ride' or 'If I rode' with a clear result clause. 'A bike that worked very well' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: choose 'when' for habitual past actions and use clear relative clause. ID: 26

× So that's so stupid.

✓ That seems silly now.

The phrase 'that's so stupid' is abrupt and unconnected; 'seems silly now' fits the reflective comment about childhood. This corrects tone and cohesion. Suggestion: use 'seems' to give opinion and 'silly' as more natural adjective in this context. ID: 26

× Of course, yes, at now when in the morning I usually sees people will ride on their bike to do exercise or some rider they take part in the competition to, to see who is the faster rider.

✓ Yes, nowadays in the morning I usually see people ride their bikes to exercise, and some riders take part in competitions to see who is the faster rider.

Multiple tense and subject-verb agreement errors: 'at now' should be 'nowadays'; 'I usually sees' should be 'I usually see' (subject-verb agreement); 'will ride on their bike' is incorrect modal/tense for habitual action — use simple present 'ride'; 'to do exercise' is better as 'to exercise'; 'some rider they take part' should be 'some riders take part' (plural agreement); 'to, to see' redundant comma. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and ensure subject-verb agreement and plural consistency. ID: 6