Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve tense accuracy, sentence structure and naturalness. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense, then add one or two brief supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how often you rode it). Use linking words if adding details and keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my eighth birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

제안: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid filler words (umm). Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to contrast ideas and be more precise about how common biking is in different areas (e.g., cities vs rural areas). Keep response to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I think bikes are moderately popular in my country. In rural areas many people cycle for short trips, but in big cities most people walk or drive because traffic and limited bike lanes make cycling less convenient.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The speaker mixes present tense 'do have' with past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use simple past 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use 'I had' for past facts, and avoid using present tense verbs with past time expressions.

× I would say neutral because people in my country, umm walks or maybe drive around the city.

✓ I would say neutral because people in my country either walk or drive around the city.

The sentence has structure problems and incorrect verb form 'walks' after plural subject 'people'. Use base verb 'walk' to agree with plural subject and add 'either' to present alternatives clearly. Also remove filler 'umm' or place it without affecting grammar. Suggestion: use 'people ... walk' and 'either ... or' for choices.