Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần trả lời đúng câu hỏi và sử dụng thì quá khứ khi nói về quá khứ. Trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó bổ sung 1–2 câu chi tiết nếu cần. Tránh dùng cấu trúc sai ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp; sửa lỗi như “Do you” → “Did you”, “when you were trying” → “when you were a child”.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. It helped me learn balance and gave me freedom to explore nearby parks.

제안: Cần tổ chức câu rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời “Yes” hoặc “No”, dùng liên từ để nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể. Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: “commute”, “students”, “delivery workers”, “more common”) và tránh các lỗi phát âm/chính tả gây hiểu nhầm. Nên đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể về ai dùng xe đạp và trong hoàn cảnh nào, đồng thời so sánh ngắn với các phương tiện khác.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country for short trips. Many people, especially students and delivery workers, use bicycles to get around the city because they are cheap and convenient. However, for longer journeys people usually prefer cars or motorbikes because they are faster.

× Do you have a bike when you were trying?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student uses present tense 'Do you have' with a past time reference 'when you were trying'. The question asks about past possession, so past simple 'Did you have' is required. Also 'when you were trying' is unclear; the examiner asked 'when you were a child', so use the same time reference. Suggestion: use past simple for events in the past and match the time expression (e.g., 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?').

× Just call people in your country because many people use them for a short trip and commuting their trip and convenience.

✓ In my country many people use bikes for short trips and commuting because they are convenient.

The original sentence has mixed fragments and incorrect tense/structure. 'Just call people in your country' is inappropriate and unclear. Use present simple 'many people use' for habitual actions. 'Commuting their trip' is wrong word order; use 'for commuting' or 'for commuting to work'. Place the reason 'because they are convenient' at the end. Suggestion: simplify and use clear subject-verb-object order and appropriate prepositions ('for short trips', 'for commuting').

× For example, student and delivery worker often write advice in the city, although cars and motorbike eyes do more common for long journey.

✓ For example, students and delivery workers often ride bikes in the city, although cars and motorbikes are more common for long journeys.

Multiple errors: plural nouns require 'students' and 'delivery workers' (singular/plural issue). 'Write advice' is incorrect verb choice; context needs 'ride' or 'use bikes'. 'Motorbike eyes' is a typo; should be 'motorbikes'. Use plural 'journeys' for countable plural. Also use 'are more common' for comparison. Suggestion: use correct plural forms, appropriate verbs (use/ride), and correct comparative structure 'are more common for long journeys'.