Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and verb tense consistency, make the answer more natural and concise, and add a brief specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense consistently for childhood events, and include one or two supporting details linked with a connector (e.g., "and" or "so"). Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child, and I used to ride it every morning with my friends. We often raced each other along our street, which was great fun and helped me become more confident on the road.

제안: Make the response more natural and organized: give a clear opinion, then two specific reasons linked with connectors (e.g., "because" and "also"). Correct grammar (use "they" or "bikes", avoid awkward phrases like "having a traffic"), and mention an example brand succinctly. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient and help people avoid heavy traffic. They are also affordable to maintain; for example, many people prefer Honda motorcycles for their reliability.

× Yes I did. I have a bike when I am a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student is describing a past state. 'Have' and 'am' are present tense; they should be in past tense ('had', 'was'). Use past simple for completed past situations. Suggestion: Use 'had' for possession in the past and 'was' for the past form of 'be'.

× I used to go on a ride on every morning with my childhood friends.

✓ I used to go for a ride every morning with my childhood friends.

The phrase 'go on a ride on every morning' is ungrammatical. After 'used to' use base verb 'go'. The correct collocation is 'go for a ride' and adverbial time 'every morning' should not be preceded by 'on'. Suggestion: Say 'go for a ride every morning'.

× We also do races on the streets we go to.

✓ We also raced on the streets we used to go to.

The student is speaking about past habitual actions, so past tense is required. 'Do races' (present) should be 'raced' or 'used to race'. Also 'we go to' should be 'we used to go to' to indicate past habit. Suggestion: Use 'used to' or past simple for past routines.

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country because this is very convenient ride.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country because they are a very convenient way to travel.

The original mixes pronouns and noun forms incorrectly. 'This is very convenient ride' is ungrammatical: 'this' doesn't refer properly and 'ride' needs an article and better noun choice. Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'bikes' and 'a very convenient way to travel' or 'a very convenient mode of transport'. Suggestion: Match pronouns and use appropriate noun phrase.

× You can travel easily while having a traffic or the most popular brand in our country is by a Honda.

✓ You can travel easily even in traffic, and the most popular brand in our country is Honda.

'While having a traffic' is incorrect; use 'even in traffic' or 'despite traffic'. 'The most popular brand in our country is by a Honda' is ungrammatical: 'by' is unnecessary and 'a' is not needed before brand names; say 'is Honda'. Suggestion: Use 'even in traffic' and 'the most popular brand is Honda'.