Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn về thời gian và trật tự sự kiện, dùng thì phù hợp và tránh lặp từ. Nên sửa thì cho nhất quán (quá khứ khi mô tả việc đã xảy ra) và thêm liên từ để mạch lạc. Ngoài ra nên rút gọn để không quá dài (tối đa 3–4 câu) và sửa lỗi chính tả/ ngữ pháp như “ride” -> “rode”, “friend” -> “friends”. Ví dụ cụ thể: nêu rõ bạn nhận xe vào dịp nào, bạn đã dùng nó như thế nào sau đó, và một chi tiết kỷ niệm.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my birthday when I was ill, and afterwards I rode it every afternoon with my friends around the neighborhood. I remember practicing balancing until I could ride without help.

제안: Cần sửa lỗi từ vựng/viết sai (“mines” -> “bikes”) và dùng danh từ số nhiều/hợp lý (“motorbikes” thay vì “motorbike”). Câu chủ đề nên ngắn gọn, sau đó giải thích rõ lý do với ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và một câu kết luận. Tránh cấu trúc chung chung; hãy nêu một lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: chi phí, tốc độ di chuyển, giao thông).

예시: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Motorbikes are far more common because they are faster and more convenient for commuting in heavy traffic. For example, many students and office workers prefer motorbikes since they save time and are cheaper than cars.

× Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child. When I was sick, my parents brought me a bike on my birthday and I always ride my bike every afternoon with my friend.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child. When I was sick, my parents bought me a bike for my birthday and I always rode my bike every afternoon with my friend.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses. 'Brought me a bike on my birthday' is unnatural here; 'bought me a bike for my birthday' is more appropriate (past simple). 'I always ride my bike every afternoon' should be in past tense 'I always rode' to match 'when I was a child'. Use consistent past simple for completed past actions. Suggestion: keep all verbs referring to childhood in past simple (had, bought, rode).

× I don't think mines are popular in my country.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

The word 'mines' is incorrect here; likely a mispronunciation or typo of 'bikes'. Use the correct noun 'bikes'. Ensure accurate word choice: 'mine' is a possessive pronoun, not a plural noun for bicycles. Replace with 'bikes'.

× In my country motorbike is the most popular transport because it's very convenient and the people can save the time to go to work or go to school.

✓ In my country, motorbikes are the most popular form of transport because they're very convenient and people can save time when going to work or school.

There are several number and article issues: use plural 'motorbikes' to speak generally. 'Transport' should be 'form of transport' or 'transport mode'. 'It's' referring to motorbikes (plural) should be 'they're'. 'The people' is odd; use 'people'. 'Save the time' should be 'save time'. Also change 'to go to work or go to school' to 'when going to work or school' for natural phrasing.