Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand your reply with a brief topic sentence and one or two supporting details. For example, state whether you wanted one or why you didn’t have one, using a linking word to add contrast or reason. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I often borrowed my neighbor’s bike to ride around the park, so I still learned how to balance and steer.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence then support it with specific reasons or examples and a linking word to connect ideas. Mention where they are popular (cities, rural areas), who uses them, or whether popularity is changing. Keep it natural and within five sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. For instance, many commuters use electric bikes for short trips, and in rural areas people often ride for errands because it’s cheaper than a car.

× No.

✓ No, I didn't.

The original answer 'No.' is brief but not grammatically incorrect; however, given the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' a full response should use past tense with auxiliary did + base verb (didn't have). Providing 'No, I didn't.' makes the tense explicit and completes the sentence. Suggestion: respond in full sentences using the auxiliary for past simple questions (e.g., 'No, I didn't.' or 'No, I didn't have one.').

× I think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ I think bicycles are popular in my country.

The original sentence is grammatically correct in present tense; the only issue addressed is style/word choice rather than grammar. To align with more formal register, replace the informal 'bikes' with 'bicycles'. The sentence uses present simple correctly to state a general opinion. Suggestion: use 'bicycles' for formality and clarity if needed.