Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Begin with a direct, grammatically correct topic sentence and keep it concise. Correct tense and word order: use past simple for past facts. Add one short supporting detail if useful. Avoid repetition and fillers.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment and my parents thought it was unsafe, so I mainly walked or took the bus to school.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and use plural nouns and correct word order. Use linking words to add reasons or examples. Be specific about how and why bikes are popular, and avoid filler words.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are inexpensive and convenient, especially in crowded urban areas.

× None. I don't have a bike when I when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'None' and mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time 'when I was a child.' Use 'No' as a short negative answer and the past tense 'didn't have' to match the past time reference. Also remove the repeated phrase 'when I.' Suggestion: Use 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' to be grammatically consistent.

× In our country bike is the is now is popular and it's the most popular travel and it and it is the cheapest. Umm.

✓ In our country, bikes are very popular now; they are a common means of travel and are the cheapest option.

The original sentence has multiple problems: incorrect article use ('bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally), repeated 'is' and 'it', incorrect noun choice ('travel' should be 'means of travel' or 'mode of transport'), and inconsistent verb forms. Use present simple 'are' to describe general facts about the present. Also add a comma after 'In our country' and replace 'it' with 'they' to match plural 'bikes.' Suggestion: Say 'In our country, bikes are very popular now; they are a common means of travel and are the cheapest option.'