Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically accurate, respond directly, and expand slightly with one or two supporting details using linking words. For example, use past tense for childhood and a brief reason or contrast. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I sometimes borrowed my neighbor’s bike to ride to the park, which I really enjoyed.

제안: Remove hesitations and unclear words, use precise vocabulary, and organize the answer with a topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Explain why bikes are popular (economy, convenience, traffic) and use correct collocations (e.g., “common” or “affordable” rather than “corporate”).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. This is because many people are middle or lower-middle class, so bicycles are an affordable and convenient way to travel, especially in congested cities.

× No, I don't have a bike when I'm a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The response refers to a past time (childhood), so past tense is required. The student mixed present simple 'don't have' and present 'I'm' with a past context. Use past simple 'didn't have' and 'was' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs consistently when talking about past events: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Yeah, umm, bikes are popular in my country, Uh, because a lot of people's, because a lot of people are middle class, lower middle class.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because many people are middle class or lower middle class.

The student used conversational fillers and an incorrect possessive 'people's' and awkward repetition. Use present simple 'are popular' correctly, and 'many people' instead of 'a lot of people's'. Also combine phrases cleanly: 'middle class or lower middle class.' Suggestion: Remove filler words, avoid incorrect possessives, and use clear noun phrases: 'because many people are middle class or lower middle class.'

× So the bikes are corporate in my country.

✓ So bikes are common in my country.

'Corporate' is incorrect here; it is an adjective related to corporations, not frequency or prevalence. The intended meaning is that bikes are common or widely used. Also remove the unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'bikes' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use appropriate vocabulary for prevalence: 'common', 'popular', or 'widely used': 'So bikes are common in my country.'