Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a slightly longer, more natural response that includes a brief explanation or detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using a linking phrase (for example, "because" or "so"). Avoid single-word or one-phrase replies to show fluency.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I used to ride a small scooter instead because my parents felt it was safer for the neighbourhood where we lived. As a result, I only learned to ride a bicycle when I was a teenager.

제안: Expand the answer with specific reasons and a short comparison. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words like "because", "however", or "for example" to make your point clearer and more natural.

예시: Bikes aren’t very popular in my country; most people prefer scooters because they’re cheaper and easier to park. For example, in the city many commuters use electric scooters for short trips, although bicycles are becoming more common among students and fitness enthusiasts.

× No, I did not.

✓ No, I didn't.

The original sentence uses the full form 'did not' which is grammatically correct but in spoken answers contractions are more natural and match the informal spoken context. Change to 'didn't' for natural spoken English. This is a style suggestion, not a grammar-rule correction, so no specific Grammar_Problem_Type_List ID applies.

× Bikes are not popular in my country.

✓ Bicycles are not very popular in my country.

'Bikes' is acceptable but 'bicycles' is slightly more formal and 'not very popular' better reflects typical spoken nuance. The original is grammatically correct, so this is a clarity/style improvement rather than a grammatical error.

× We use scooters.

✓ Most people use scooters.

The original sentence is grammatically correct but a more natural response specifies the subject 'most people' to answer the examiner's question about general popularity. This is a pragmatic/style improvement, not a grammatical error.