Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문에 직접적으로 답하지 않았습니다. 간단한 주제 문장으로 시작한 뒤, 한두 개의 구체적인 세부사항(언제, 누구와, 얼마나 자주 등)을 추가하세요. 답변은 최대 5문장으로 유지하고 연결어(예: "because", "so", "but")를 사용해 흐름을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it every afternoon around my neighborhood. Because I practiced a lot with my older brother, I became quite confident riding on busy streets. It was my main way of getting to a friend's house during summer.

제안: 질문에 대한 명확한 의견 표현과 그 이유, 예시를 덧붙이지 않았습니다. 직접적인 의견 문장으로 시작한 뒤 이유나 한두 가지 구체적인 예(도심의 자전거 도로, 통근용 이용률 등)를 연결어로 설명하세요. 관련 어휘(commuting, infrastructure, bike lanes)를 사용해 내용을 구체화하면 좋습니다.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are becoming increasingly popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have built more bike lanes recently, so commuting by bike is safer and faster. However, in rural areas cars are still more common due to long distances.

× (no response) to 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original transcript shows no student response; to answer the past simple question correctly, use the past tense 'had'. This corrects sentence structure by providing a subject and past-tense verb. Suggestion: form a full sentence with subject + past-tense verb (I had).

× (no response) to 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original transcript shows no student response; to answer the present simple question about general beliefs, use present simple 'I think' and a present-tense complement. This fixes tense and completes the sentence. Suggestion: use subject + base-form verb for habitual/general statements (I think).