Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly but use correct tense and add one or two specific supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give brief details (where/what kind of bike, who gave it, or how you used it). Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was six, and I rode it to visit friends in the neighborhood. Because it was lightweight and had training wheels at first, I learned to ride very quickly.

제안: Give a clearer direct opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use modal verbs carefully; prefer definite language if you are confident (e.g., “Yes, I think so”) and then add 1–2 concrete reasons or an example. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” to connect ideas and keep the answer within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and to save money on transport. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and shared bike programs that encourage cycling and help reduce air pollution.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the student should use the past tense. 'Do' is present tense; change to 'did' to match the time frame. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time reference in the question (use past tense for past events).

× It should be because it is a great solution for preventing air pollution.

✓ I think so because it is a great way to help prevent air pollution.

The original uses 'should' which expresses obligation or probability but sounds odd answering whether bikes are popular. Use a phrase expressing opinion ('I think so') and 'help prevent' is more natural than 'solution for preventing'. Also 'way' fits better than 'solution' in this context. Suggestion: use opinion phrases for beliefs and natural collocations like 'help prevent'.