Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and correct basic grammar and vocabulary, give a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Focus on correct verbs (had, rode), pronouns, and simple past tense. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about five years old. However, I did not ride it very often, so my grandfather lent it to two other children. I was really sad because it was my favourite bike and I enjoyed riding it around the neighborhood.

제안: Make a direct topic sentence and support it with specific examples and linking words. Correct awkward phrases and use precise vocabulary (popular, ride, cycling tours, social media). Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid fillers like 'uh' and repeated words.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in Taiwan. Many people go on weekend cycling tours around the island, and they often post photos and routes on social media. For example, the coastal and mountain bike paths attract both locals and tourists.

× I used to have a buy when I was about 5 years old but because I not very often write write it so my grandpa started so two others child.

✓ I used to have a bike when I was about 5 years old, but because I did not ride it very often my grandpa gave it to two other children.

The sentence has several plural/singular errors and verb tense/word choice issues. 'buy' is a misspelling of 'bike'. 'not very often write write it' should be 'did not ride it very often' (past tense with auxiliary did). 'so my grandpa started so two others child' is incorrect: 'started' is wrong verb and 'two others child' should be plural 'two other children'. Use 'gave it to' to express the transfer. Suggestion: use correct noun plural forms (children) and correct past tense forms with did + base verb; proofread for misspellings.

× But I really sad about it because this is my favorite.

✓ But I was really sad about it because it was my favorite.

Tense mismatch: the context is past ('I used to have a bike'), so 'sad' and 'is' should be past tense. Change 'I really sad' to 'I was really sad' and 'this is my favorite' to 'it was my favorite'. Also replace 'this' with 'it' to refer to the bike. Suggestion: maintain past tense consistently when describing past events.

× Yes, I do things by its popular in my country uh, a lot of people ride by around Taiwan to have a like a week and they often post this kind of activity on social media and it's really popular and.

✓ Yes, I do. Bikes are popular in my country. A lot of people ride bikes around Taiwan for a week-long trip, and they often post this kind of activity on social media, so it's really popular.

Multiple issues: 'I do things by its popular' is incorrect pronoun and structure. Use 'I do' or 'Yes, they are' for agreement. 'its' should be 'they are' or 'bikes are'. 'ride by around Taiwan to have a like a week' has wrong prepositions and article usage: use 'ride bikes around Taiwan for a week-long trip'. Also sentence run-on and missing conjunctions. Suggestion: split into clear sentences, use correct pronouns (they/it) and prepositions ('around', 'for'), and ensure articles ('a week-long trip').