Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear direct answer (yes/no) followed by one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and concise, use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’ if you add reasons. Limit to no more than five short sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because my parents lived near a safe playground, I practiced almost every day and became confident by the time I was nine.

제안: Again you repeated the question instead of answering. Start with a clear opinion (e.g., ‘Yes, they are’ or ‘No, not very’), then support it with 1–3 specific reasons or an example. Use linking words such as ‘because’, ‘for example’ or ‘however’ to connect points and keep responses concise and natural.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because traffic is heavy and bike lanes are becoming more common. However, in rural areas cars are still more common due to longer distances.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The corrected sentence uses simple past tense ('had') to match the time reference 'when you were a child' and provides a complete declarative answer. Suggestion: Answer questions rather than repeat them; use the past tense for past situations (subject + past verb), for example 'No, I didn't have a bike' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original student response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The corrected sentence keeps the present simple tense 'think' to express the student's opinion and provides a clear affirmative answer. Suggestion: When asked for an opinion, respond with 'Yes/No, I think...' or 'I believe...' and use present simple for general opinions (subject + base verb for I/you/we/they).