Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 質問をそのまま繰り返すのではなく、直接答えてから簡潔な追加情報を述べる練習をしてください。たとえば、肯定・否定の立場をはっきり示し、その後で時期や理由、覚えていること（例：どんな自転車だったか、誰と乗ったか）などの具体的な詳細を1〜2文で付け加えると自然で効果的です。接続詞（because, so, when, and）を使って文をつなげる練習も重要です。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my fifth birthday, and I used to ride it every afternoon with my older brother in the neighborhood park.

제안: 文が途切れており矛盾もあります。まず短く明確な主文を作り、次に理由や具体例で裏付けをしてください。接続詞（because, but, although）を正しく使い、矛盾した語（cars or bicycles）を避けてください。例として「自転車はあまり一般的ではない。多くの人が車や公共交通機関を使う」など具体的な傾向や理由（気候、インフラ、安全性）を挙げると良いです。

예시: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or buses because cities are spread out and there are few dedicated bike lanes, so riding a bike can be unsafe and inconvenient.

× I don't think bikes are popular in my country because. People usually use cars or bicycles.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because people usually use cars.

The original has a sentence fragment caused by a misplaced period after 'because' and redundancy in mentioning both 'bikes' and 'bicycles'. Combine clauses properly into one sentence: 'because' must be followed by a clause explaining the reason. Also choose one term (either 'bikes' or 'bicycles') to avoid repetition. Suggestion: connect the clauses and remove the extra period to form a complete sentence: 'I don't think bikes are popular in my country because people usually use cars.'