Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct tense forms (past for childhood, present for current state), eliminate hesitation and irrelevant phrases, and provide a concise, coherent response with one or two supporting details. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words (e.g., because, but, so). For example, directly state whether you had a bike, explain why you no longer do (brief reason), and mention your future intention if relevant.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I stopped riding after I had an accident, so I don't have one now. However, I hope to start riding again in the future once I feel more confident.

제안: Focus on answering the question directly and use accurate vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence about bike popularity, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Avoid unrelated words (e.g., 'parks' instead of 'bikes') and correct word choices (e.g., 'cheaper' not 'shipper'). Provide one or two concise supporting points such as traffic, cost, or environmental benefits.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Because traffic is heavy and parking is expensive, many people choose bicycles since they are faster for short trips and much cheaper than cars.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

Student used present tense 'have' to answer a past-tense question. The examiner asked about having a bike when the student was a child (past), so the correct short answer is past tense 'did'. Use past simple to match the time frame.

× I had a bike when I was a child, but now I didn't have because, uh, I'm afraid to write about a bike again because I'm, I made accident when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, but I don't have one now because I'm afraid to ride a bike again; I had an accident when I was a child.

Multiple tense and verb choice errors: 'now I didn't have' mixes past negative with 'now' and should be present negative 'I don't have'. 'write about a bike' is incorrect word choice; context requires 'ride a bike'. 'I made accident' is incorrect; English uses 'I had an accident'. Use consistent tense and correct verbs: past simple for past events ('I had an accident') and present simple for current states ('I don't have one now').

× So I hope in the future we'd bike again, but now no.

✓ So I hope in the future I'll ride a bike again, but not now.

The student used 'we'd' which is ambiguous (would or we had) and plural 'we' which doesn't match context. Use 'I'll' (I will) to express a personal future hope. 'bike' as a verb is informal; use 'ride a bike' for clarity. 'but now no' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'but not now'.

× Yes, parks are popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy and the parking is hard to find.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy and parking is hard to find.

The student wrote 'parks' instead of 'bikes', likely a lexical error rather than grammar, but it changes meaning. Also 'the parking is hard to find' should be general 'parking is hard to find' (article removal). Ensure vocabulary matches the question and use no article when speaking generally about parking.

× So people like toyed a pie because it's faster and shipper than car.

✓ So people like to ride a bike because it's faster and cheaper than a car.

Multiple lexical and grammatical errors: 'like toyed a pie' is nonsensical; correct phrase is 'like to ride a bike'. 'shipper' is incorrect; likely intended 'cheaper'. Also comparison requires 'cheaper than a car' and include the article 'a' before 'car'. Use the infinitive 'to ride' after 'like' and correct comparative adjective 'cheaper'.