Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a fuller, natural response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid one-word answers and be concise (no more than 5 sentences). Mention who it belonged to, how often you used it, or a short memory to make the answer vivid.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven. I rode it to the park almost every afternoon, and I remember learning to balance on it with my father's help. It was my favorite way to play outside because it made me feel independent.

제안: Provide a direct topic sentence and then explain why with specific reasons and a linking word. Use plural agreement ("they are") and give concrete examples (commuting, recreation, city bike-sharing) to support your view. Keep it natural and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, cities now have bike lanes and public bike-sharing schemes, which makes cycling convenient and affordable for students and workers.

× Yes, it is.

✓ Yes, they are.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). The student used the singular pronoun 'it' which does not agree with the plural noun. This is a pronoun-number agreement error. Use a plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' to match 'bikes'. Suggestion: identify the noun number in the question and choose matching pronoun and verb (e.g., 'Yes, they are.' or 'Yes, bicycles are popular.').