Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct article and word order, then add one brief supporting detail (e.g., how you used it or a memory). Use linking words if adding details. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a pink bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it to my friend’s house, and it was my favorite way to get around because it felt freeing and fun.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with concise, specific reasons using correct tense and linking words. Avoid fillers like “uh” and incorrect phrases (use “these days” or “in recent decades”). Limit to two or three sentences with concrete examples (e.g., commuting, exercise, environmental reasons).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular these days. In recent years more people use them for short commutes and exercise because they are cheap, healthy, and better for the environment.

× That was pink bicycle.

✓ That was a pink bicycle.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article before a singular, countable noun. Use 'a' before a consonant sound to indicate one item: 'a pink bicycle.' Suggestion: include appropriate articles (a/an/the) with singular countable nouns.

× Yes, but in this time, in this decades is more popular and more, uh, useful for people.

✓ Yes, but nowadays, in these decades, bikes are more popular and more useful for people.

Multiple issues: incorrect time expression and tense/number agreement. 'In this time' and 'in this decades' are ungrammatical; use 'nowadays' or 'in recent decades' and match plural 'decades' with 'these.' Also the sentence lacked a proper subject and verb agreement: 'is more popular' should be 'bikes are more popular' to agree with plural subject. Suggestion: use 'nowadays' or 'in recent decades' and ensure subject-verb agreement by including the subject 'bikes' with 'are.'