Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct but too short and lacks detail. To improve, give a short topic sentence and then add one or two supporting details (reason, brief example or contrast) using a linking word. Keep it natural and limit to about 2–4 sentences. For example, explain why you didn’t have one, or mention an alternative you used.

예시: No, I did not have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took a bus because my family lived in a city where it was unsafe to cycle. As a result, I only learned basic cycling later as a teenager.

제안: Your answer begins well but is incomplete and hesitant. To improve, state a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details and a reason, using a linking word (for example, 'because' or 'mainly due to'). Avoid filler words like 'umm' and finish the thought within 2–4 sentences. Mention who uses bikes and why (commuting, cost, culture) for concreteness.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and to save money. For instance, students and delivery workers often cycle in cities where traffic is heavy, and there are also growing bike lanes that make cycling safer.

× No, I did not have.

✓ No, I did not.

The question asks about possession in the past (Did you have a bike when you were a child?). In short answers to yes/no questions in the past tense using 'did', the auxiliary 'did' already indicates past, so the main verb should be in its base form. Saying 'I did not have' is grammatically possible but sounds incomplete in spoken short answers; the more natural short response is 'No, I did not.' Alternatively a full sentence would be 'No, I did not have one.' To improve, use 'No, I did not.' for short answers or 'No, I did not have a bike.' for a full sentence. Suggestion: for short replies use the auxiliary alone ('No, I did not.'), or include the object in base form ('No, I did not have a bike.').

× Umm yes, bikes are popular in our country because umm.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

The student partially answered the present-tense question correctly ('bikes are popular'). However, filler words like 'umm' should be omitted in written responses and a reason after 'because' is expected. The sentence as given ends with 'because' with no clause, which is incomplete. To correct, remove fillers and either finish the clause ('because they are affordable and practical') or omit 'because' entirely. For improvement, prepare a short reason to follow 'because' or give a complete sentence without trailing conjunctions.