Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сформулируйте ответ более естественно и без сокращений, исправьте грамматические ошибки и описательные неточности. Начните с чёткого предложения по теме, затем добавьте 1–2 поддерживающих предложения с деталями (как часто, кто одалживал велосипед, ваши чувства). Используйте связывания (for example, so, but) и избегайте сокращений вроде '1' или неверных форм глаголов (например, 'Rd.').

예시: I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or rode a small scooter. For example, I sometimes borrowed a neighbour’s bike on weekends, which was fun but a bit scary because it was too big for me.

제안: Сделайте утверждение ясным, исправьте грамматические ошибки и заполните мысль полностью. Используйте связки (because, however, for example) и точные слова (many people, own cars). Добавьте конкретный пример или сравнение (например, общественный транспорт или городской трафик) и избегайте звуков-заполнителей (uh).

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many people own cars and a lot of students travel by bus. However, in some cities cycling is becoming more common due to new bike lanes and traffic congestion.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford 1, so I usually walk to school or Rd. a small scooter instead.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or rode a small scooter instead.

The sentence mixes past and present forms. The context is past (when I was a child), so verbs should be in past tense: 'walk' -> 'walked' and 'Rd.' is an incorrect abbreviation; use 'rode' (past of 'ride'). Also use 'one' instead of '1'. Suggestion: Keep all verbs in the past when describing past habits: 'I usually walked' and 'rode a small scooter.' Use full words rather than abbreviations.

× Sometimes I borrowed any neighbor's bike which was fun but a bit scary because it was too big for me.

✓ Sometimes I borrowed a neighbor's bike, which was fun but a bit scary because it was too big for me.

Using 'any' before a singular countable noun is incorrect in affirmative past-tense statements. Use the indefinite article 'a' for a single neighbor's bike. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which was fun...'. Suggestion: Use 'a neighbor's bike' for one specific but not previously mentioned bike and include punctuation for clarity.

× Bikes aren't popular in my country because everyone has own car and uh, a lot people goes to school or to university by bus and.

✓ Bikes aren't popular in my country because everyone has their own car, and a lot of people go to school or university by bus.

Multiple issues: 'has own car' needs possessive determiner 'their' after 'has' -> 'has their own car'. 'a lot people' requires 'a lot of people'. 'goes' is incorrect for plural subject 'people' — use 'go'. Remove the trailing conjunction 'and' and redundant 'to' before 'university'. Suggestion: Use 'their' for singular they agreement ('everyone has their'), include 'of' in 'a lot of people', and match verb number: 'people go'. Remove unnecessary filler and punctuation.