Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kosakata yang salah, gunakan kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan jelas, serta tambahkan kata penghubung yang tepat. Misalnya, gunakan bentuk lampau yang konsisten (had/was), kata benda yang benar (bike bukan back), dan frasa yang koheren. Jaga jawaban tidak lebih dari 3–4 kalimat: satu kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab, lalu 1–2 kalimat pendukung dengan detail spesifik (mis. umur, jenis sepeda, aktivitas), gunakan linking words seperti “and” atau “which helped”.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike with training wheels that my parents gave me for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon, which gave me a sense of freedom and helped me build confidence and coordination.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa, pemilihan kata, dan klaritas ide. Gunakan bentuk jamak/penunjuk yang benar (bicycles, an essential mode of transport), serta hilangkan kata yang salah atau tidak jelas. Berikan contoh spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung seperti “for example” atau “because” untuk menjelaskan alasan. Batasi panjang menjadi 2–3 kalimat yang padat dan relevan.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and rural areas because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel. For example, many people cycle to work or school to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Yes I did. I have a back when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

'Have' is present tense and does not match the past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to indicate possession in the past. Also 'back' is a typo for 'bike'. Suggestion: use past simple ('had') for completed past possession and proofread for typos.

× It was a small basic hole with training wheels that my parents both put for me on my 7th birthday.

✓ It was a small basic bike with training wheels that my parents put on for me on my 7th birthday.

Several issues: 'hole' is wrong word; should be 'bike'. The phrase 'my parents both put for me' has incorrect word order and extra 'both'. The correct structure is 'my parents put on [the bike] for me'. Suggestion: remove 'both' unless emphasising both parents, and use correct verb + particle 'put on'.

× I used to ride it around the night for hood every afternoon which not only gave me freedom but also help me build confidence and coordination.

✓ I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon, which not only gave me freedom but also helped me build confidence and coordination.

Multiple errors: 'the night for hood' seems to be garbled; correct phrase is 'around the neighborhood'. 'Help' should be past tense 'helped' to match 'gave' and 'used to'. Also a comma is needed before the relative clause. Suggestion: ensure vocabulary fits context ('neighborhood') and keep verb tenses consistent in the past.

× Yes, bicycle are quite popular in my country, especially in urban and rural areas where they serve as inevitable and confident mode of transport for in.

✓ Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in urban and rural areas where they serve as an inevitable and convenient mode of transport for people.

Subject 'bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' to agree with 'are'. 'Mode' requires an article 'a'. 'Confident' is the wrong adjective; likely meant 'convenient'. 'for in' is incorrect; should be 'for people'. Suggestion: ensure noun-pronoun number agreement and choose appropriate adjectives.

× For instance, many people cycle to work or school to avoid traffic and serve harmful call.

✓ For instance, many people cycle to work or school to avoid traffic and reduce harmful emissions.

The phrase 'serve harmful call' is incorrect and nonsensical. Context suggests the intended meaning is reducing environmental harm; use 'reduce harmful emissions'. Also ensure verbs match the meaning: 'avoid' pairs with 'traffic', and 'reduce' with 'harmful emissions'. Suggestion: clarify intended idea and choose collocations that convey that meaning.