Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise and more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail explaining why, using correct tense and vocabulary. Avoid repetition and limit to 2–3 sentences. For example, say you didn’t have one as a child because of parental rules and mention when you learned to ride.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought I was too young. I learned to ride a bicycle when I was about 18, and I practised near my home until I felt confident.

제안: Provide a clearer, structured response: state your opinion, give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words, and avoid vague or grammatically incorrect phrases. Use comparative and precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘cheaper’, ‘fuel-efficient’, ‘convenient for short trips’). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people prefer them because they are cheaper and more fuel-efficient than cars, and they are convenient for short to medium-distance commutes in crowded cities.

× I didn't have a bike when I was child because it was too it was too young and my parents didn't allow me to ride on them.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was too young and my parents didn't allow me to ride one.

Multiple issues: missing article before 'child' -> 'a child' (Article errors, ID 22); awkward phrase 'it was too it was too young' should be 'I was too young' (Sentence structure errors, ID 26); 'ride on them' is incorrect pronoun and preposition for a singular bike -> 'ride one' (Incorrect use of pronouns ID 12 and Incorrect use of prepositions ID 11). Suggestion: use clear subject pronouns, correct articles, and match singular/plural forms: 'I was too young' and 'ride one.'

× I I learned, I learned the ride on the bike when I was about 18.

✓ I learned to ride a bike when I was about 18.

Redundancy and wrong verb pattern: 'learned the ride on the bike' is ungrammatical. After 'learned' use the infinitive 'to ride' or the gerund 'riding' depending on meaning; here 'learned to ride' is natural (Verb + -ing form ID 8 and Verb in the present participle ID 10 are related). Also remove repeated words 'I I' (Sentence structure errors ID 26) and use article 'a bike' (Article errors ID 22). Suggestion: 'I learned to ride a bike when I was about 18.'

× Yes, bikes are more popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

Comparative 'more popular' needs a comparison target (Incorrect comparison object ID 19). If you mean general popularity, use the positive form 'popular.' Suggestion: say 'bikes are popular' or 'bikes are more popular than cars' with a comparison object.

× Most of people use bikes rather than other vehicles in my country because it is a cheaper and it gives a better mileage and cover a long distance which other vehicle do not.

✓ Most people use bikes rather than other vehicles in my country because they are cheaper, give better mileage, and can cover longer distances than other vehicles.

Multiple errors: 'Most of people' should be 'Most people' (Article/quantifier error ID 22/14). 'It is a cheaper' uses wrong pronoun and article; refer to 'bikes' plural -> 'they are cheaper' (Incorrect use of pronouns ID 12 and Singular/plural issue ID 1). 'gives a better mileage' -> 'give better mileage' (subject-verb agreement ID 27 and article error ID 22). 'cover a long distance' should be 'cover longer distances' to match plural and comparison, and 'which other vehicle do not' should be 'than other vehicles' with correct comparison structure (Comparative and superlative errors ID 25, Incorrect comparison object ID 19, Incorrect use of pronouns ID 12). Suggestion: make subjects and verbs agree in number, use plural nouns consistently, and use 'than' for comparisons: 'they are cheaper, give better mileage, and can cover longer distances than other vehicles.'