Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and give a clear reason with one supporting detail. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting points using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so"). Also correct tense and subject-verb agreement (e.g., "my parents and brothers didn't buy one").

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was dangerous. For example, there were few safe places to ride near our home, so they preferred I walked or took public transport.

제안: Give a clear statement, avoid repetition, and include a specific reason with an example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to make your answer coherent. Use plural/singular correctly ("bikes are" not "bike is"). Limit to up to five sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people use bicycles to commute short distances in cities, and bike lanes in some areas make cycling easier and faster than driving.

× No, I didn't have any bike in the in in my childhood because it it was it was very, very dangerous to child. That's why my parents and my brothers don't didn't but.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood because it was very dangerous for a child. That's why my parents and my brothers didn't buy one.

Errors: repetition words and wrong verb forms and preposition/verb choice. 'any bike' is acceptable in negatives but 'a bike' is more natural here; remove duplicated words. Use past tense consistently: 'it was' (already present) and 'didn't buy' instead of 'don't didn't but' which is ungrammatical. Use the correct preposition 'for a child' to show who is affected. Suggestion: keep verbs in past tense for past situations, avoid repeating words, and use 'buy one' to refer to a bike concisely.

× No, I didn't have any bike in the in in my childhood because it it was it was very, very dangerous to child. That's why my parents and my brothers don't didn't but.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood because it was very dangerous for a child. That's why my parents and my brothers didn't buy one.

Pronoun and reference errors: 'to child' is missing an article and should be 'for a child' to correctly indicate who is affected. 'my parents and my brothers' is fine but the verb must match in past tense: 'didn't buy one.' Suggestion: use 'for a child' and the pronoun 'one' to avoid repetition.

× Yes, I think, I think that because bike bike is the bike is the bike is that it easily, easily, easily move, easily move it easily move. So every everybody use it to.

✓ Yes, I think that bicycles are popular because they are easy to ride and move. So everybody uses them.

Tense and number problems: the student mixes present tense with wrong subject-verb agreement and repetition. Use plural 'bicycles' or singular 'a bicycle' consistently; use present simple for general truths: 'are popular', 'are easy', 'uses' with singular/plural agreement: 'everybody uses'. Replace awkward 'it easily move' with 'they are easy to ride and move' or 'they are easy to use'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, avoid repetition, use subject-verb agreement, and use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to bicycles.

× Yes, I think, I think that because bike bike is the bike is the bike is that it easily, easily, easily move, easily move it easily move. So every everybody use it to.

✓ Yes, I think that bicycles are popular because they are easy to ride and move. So everybody uses them.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'it easily move' is incorrect; with singular 'it' the verb should be 'moves' and with plural 'they' the verb should be 'move' or use 'are easy to ride'. Also 'everybody use' should be 'everybody uses' because 'everybody' is singular. Suggestion: choose singular or plural for the subject and make the verb agree, and use 'everybody uses' for general statements.