Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically correct, give a complete direct response and add one or two brief supporting details. Use past tense and include a topic sentence plus a short detail. Keep it natural and concise.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that I used to ride to the park with my friends on weekends.

제안: Answer directly, use correct grammar and clearer specific details. Use linking words (for example, because or so) and concrete reasons or examples. Limit to up to five short sentences and avoid vague phrases like "something else."

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For example, in cities with heavy traffic, cycling is faster and cheaper than driving, and it is also good exercise.

× Yes, I have bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student used 'have bike' which shows two issues: singular/plural noun without an article and incorrect tense. According to the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' the past tense should be used ('had') and a singular countable noun requires an article ('a bike'). Suggestion: use past tense for past events and include the appropriate article before singular countable nouns ('a' or 'the').

× Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because many people use bike for go your work there and something else.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because many people use bikes to go to work and for other reasons.

Multiple errors: 1) 'use bike' is singular after 'many people' so plural 'bikes' is required (singular/plural issue). 2) 'for go your work' is incorrect structure and choice of preposition and pronoun: use 'to go to work' (correct infinitive and preposition) and 'your' is wrong; should be neutral 'work'. 3) 'and something else' is informal and vague; 'for other reasons' is natural. Suggestion: match noun number with subject, use 'use X to do Y' for purpose, include correct prepositions ('to work'), and use neutral phrasing ('other reasons').