Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, accurate and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I had a bike as a child.”), then give one or two specific supporting details using correct verbs and linking words. Correct key grammar errors (e.g. use ‘ride’ not ‘write’; use past simple consistently). Keep responses natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it at about five or six years old, and my brother taught me how to balance and pedal. I remember feeling very excited the first time I rode without training wheels.

제안: Answer directly, then give a clear reason with correct vocabulary and linking words. Use accurate verbs and collocations (e.g. ‘popular’, ‘use public transport’). Avoid fragmented sentences and maintain coherence with words like ‘because’ or ‘however’.

예시: Not really — bikes are not very popular where I live. Because I live in the city, most people prefer to use public transport or cars, so cycling is uncommon for daily travel.

× Yes I did on a bike as long as I remember.

✓ Yes, I did. I have ridden a bike for as long as I can remember.

The original mixes past simple and incorrect phrasing. 'Yes I did on a bike' is ungrammatical. Use 'I did' to answer the question and then a correct statement: present perfect 'have ridden' expresses experience continuing to now: 'for as long as I can remember' is the idiomatic expression. Also add commas and proper punctuation.

× I'm the age of 5 to 6 and my brother taught me how to write it when I feel excited for the first time learning how to ride a bike.

✓ I was about five or six years old when my brother taught me how to ride it; I remember feeling excited the first time I learned.

Problems: wrong pronoun and verb ('I'm the age of 5 to 6' should be 'I was about five or six years old'); 'write it' is incorrect word choice—should be 'ride it'; tense consistency: use past 'was','taught','felt','learned' because the event is in the past. Rephrase for clarity and natural English. Use numerals written as words for small ages.

× For the time I think bikes not that popular in our country because I live in the city.

✓ At the moment, I think bikes are not very popular in our country because I live in the city.

Errors: 'For the time' is unnatural—use 'At the moment' or 'Nowadays'. Missing auxiliary verb for negation: 'bikes not that popular' must be 'bikes are not that popular' (subject-verb agreement and negation). 'Very' is a better collocation than 'that' in this context. Maintain present simple for general truth.

× And everyone is writing a public transportation when we go out.

✓ And everyone uses public transportation when we go out.

'Writing a public transportation' is incorrect verb choice and structure. Use 'uses' (present simple) because it's a habitual action: 'everyone uses public transportation when we go out.' Also remove the article 'a' before 'public transportation' because 'public transportation' is an uncountable noun in this context. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'everyone uses'.