Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct answer, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and tense errors. Use linking words if you add extra information. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was very young. However, I received a bicycle as a gift from my grandfather on my fifth birthday, and I remember learning to ride it in our neighborhood park. It was a simple red bike with training wheels that made me feel very proud.

제안: Answer directly, then support with clear reasons and examples. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore) to connect ideas, and be specific about who uses bikes and why.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily commuting. For example, people over 18 often have motorcycles or scooters with a license, which are cheaper and faster for short trips. As a result, bikes are a convenient and common way to travel between home, work, and market.

× No, when I was a child I had no bike, but I have a bicycle which was gifted my my my by my grandfather on my 5th birthday.

✓ No, when I was a child I did not have a bike, but I received a bicycle as a gift from my grandfather on my fifth birthday.

The sentence mixes past-tense forms incorrectly. 'I had no bike' is understandable but 'did not have' is the standard negative past form. 'Was gifted my my my by my grandfather' is ungrammatical: use an active past verb 'received' or a correct passive 'was gifted a bicycle by my grandfather'. Also correct word order and remove repeated words and use 'fifth' instead of '5th' in formal writing. Suggestion: use 'did not have' for negative past and 'received' or 'was gifted a bicycle by' for the gift event.

× He has bikes in our country is very popular as all the people have a bike with the license who ha whose age is age is above 18.

✓ Bicycles are very popular in our country because many people over 18 have a driving license and own a bike.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems and unclear pronouns. 'He has bikes in our country is very popular' mixes subject clauses and is ungrammatical. Replace with a clear subject 'Bicycles are very popular'. Use 'because' to show reason. 'all the people have a bike with the license who ha whose age is age is above 18' is redundant and repetitive; simplify to 'many people over 18 have a driving license and own a bike.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct relative clause ordering.

× People can use it when they want to go from one place to another.

✓ People can use them when they want to go from one place to another.

Pronoun reference is incorrect: 'it' refers to 'bikes' which is plural, so use the plural pronoun 'them'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and agreement between noun number and pronoun. Suggestion: match pronoun number to its antecedent.

× It is very convenient method.

✓ It is a very convenient method.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'method'. This is an article error (also listed under adjective/adverb usage here) and affects correctness. Use 'a very convenient method' or better 'It is a very convenient way' to sound natural.