Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сосредоточьтесь на ясной и логичной структуре ответа: начните с прямого утверждения, затем кратко объясните причину и завершите связным итогом. Избегайте повторов, исправьте грамматические ошибки (времена, артикли, согласование) и используйте более подходящую лексику (например, «ride/own a bike», «couldn’t afford», «borrowed»). Ограничьте ответ до максимум 3–4 предложений и используйте связки: «because», «so», «however».

예시: I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. I also wasn’t very interested in riding at the time, so I didn’t ask for one. Later, when I was older, I occasionally borrowed a bicycle from a friend.

제안: Дайте прямой ответ и затем подкрепите его конкретными причинами и примерами. Избегайте повторов и заменяйте неточные слова: «popular», «in many countries», «cheap», «fuel/gasoline»; исправьте грамматику (артикли, множественное число). Используйте связки: «because», «for example», «as a result». Старайтесь быть более конкретным (например, кто чаще использует велосипеды и в каких ситуациях).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are a cheap and convenient mode of transport. For example, many students and workers use bicycles to commute short distances, especially in crowded cities. As a result, you can often see bike lanes and rental services in urban areas.

× When you were a child, honestly, my parents cannot afford it.

✓ When I was a child, honestly, my parents could not afford it.

The speaker refers to a past situation, so the modal verb 'cannot' should be moved into the past as 'could not'. Also the subject 'you' is incorrect for the context; it should be 'I'. Use 'could not afford' to indicate inability in the past. Suggestions: replace 'you' with 'I' and use past form 'could not' for 'cannot'.

× And I I I never was interested in writing transportation.

✓ And I was never interested in riding a bicycle.

The original has incorrect verb choice and word order. 'Writing transportation' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'ride' and the noun is 'bicycle' or 'cycling'. The adverb 'never' should appear before the main verb 'was' or between auxiliary and main verb; here 'was never interested' is correct. Suggestions: use 'ride' instead of 'write' and 'bicycle' or 'cycling' as the object; structure as 'I was never interested in riding a bicycle.'

× That was really difficult for me.

✓ That was really difficult for me.

This sentence is grammatically correct and properly uses past tense 'was' to describe a past situation. No change needed.

× But but when I grew up older, I borrow bicycle.

✓ But when I grew older, I borrowed a bicycle.

The sentence refers to a past action, so use past tense 'borrowed' rather than present 'borrow'. 'Grew up older' is redundant; use 'grew older' or 'grew up'. Also include the indefinite article 'a' before 'bicycle'. Suggestions: 'when I grew older' or 'when I grew up'; use 'borrowed a bicycle'.

× Actually bikes are well known in every countries because it's the most most cheap way of of travelling and you shouldn't pay so much for benzene.

✓ Actually, bikes are well known in every country because they are the cheapest way of travelling and you don't need to pay so much for petrol.

Multiple issues: 'every countries' should be singular 'every country' (each requires singular). 'It's the most most cheap' is incorrect adjective order and form; use the superlative 'the cheapest'. 'They are' matches plural 'bikes'. 'You shouldn't pay so much for benzene' is awkward; use 'you don't need to pay so much for petrol' (or 'gas' in American English). 'Benzene' is a chemical name and not used to mean fuel. Also remove duplicate words and correct preposition/word choice. Suggestions: use 'every country', 'they are the cheapest', 'you don't need to pay so much for petrol'.