Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говорите более прямо и связно: начните с короткого ответа, затем добавьте 1–2 предложения с объяснением. Устраните повторы и ненужные слова, используйте простые связки (because, so, therefore). Работайте над произношением и беглостью, убирая паузы и «ээм».

예시: No, I didn’t. I was never a big fan of bicycles or motorbikes because I thought they were dangerous. Instead, I preferred walking and other outdoor activities, so I rarely rode a bike as a child.

제안: Дайте более конкретную информацию и используйте связки для ясности. Начните с короткого утверждения, затем приведите 1–2 конкретных примера и заключение. Избегайте повторов слов и заполняющих звуков («umm», «uh»).

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many cities organise annual cycling marathons and local bike races, and schools often promote cycling as a healthy activity. Therefore, cycling is both a common pastime and a growing sport here.

× Well, frankly not.

✓ Well, frankly, no.

The original sentence uses 'not' without a supporting clause; 'no' is the correct short negative response here. Add a comma after 'frankly' for natural pausing.

× I'm not big fan of some bikes, motorbikes or others since my childhood.

✓ I'm not a big fan of bikes or motorbikes since my childhood.

The phrase requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'big fan' (article error). Remove 'some' and 'or others' which are redundant. Keep 'since my childhood' to indicate time; ensure verb tense matches (present perfect could be used, but present simple with 'since' is acceptable colloquially).

× I prefer to go for a walk or or others activities because I I seemed I was so I saw bikes so dangerous for me and.

✓ I prefer to go for a walk or do other activities because I have always felt that bikes are too dangerous for me.

Original contains repeated words and fragmented structure (sentence structure errors and verb form issues). Use 'do other activities' instead of 'or others activities' (preposition/pronoun and noun form). Use present perfect 'have always felt' to express a feeling continuing from the past to present. Use 'too dangerous' for natural adjective use.

× Well, yes, in general, bicycles are widespread in my country.

✓ Well, yes. In general, bicycles are widespread in my country.

Mainly punctuation: replace comma with a period for clearer sentence separation. Tense and verb choice are correct; just improve clarity.

× For example, we have some activities like bicycle marathon, marathon and umm, sports, uh, bicycle bike competitions, umm, moreover.

✓ For example, we have events such as bicycle marathons and bike competitions.

Original contains repetition ('marathon, marathon', 'bicycle bike'), filler words, and awkward listing. Use 'events such as' and plural nouns 'marathons' and 'competitions' for clarity and correct noun forms.