Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (age, how often you rode, or a memory). Use linking words like "and" or "so" to connect ideas. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was seven, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. It helped me feel independent and I remember learning to ride with my older brother.

제안: Your answer attempts to respond but has grammar and vocabulary errors and is repetitive. Start with a clear opinion (Yes or No), then give specific supporting reasons and an example. Use correct plural and possessive forms and linking words like "because" or "for example." Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many children and students ride bicycles to school and to local shops, especially in smaller towns where traffic is light.

× Yes, nowadays many Childs, many child, many children's used to ride a bicycle.

✓ Yes, nowadays many children used to ride bicycles.

The student incorrectly used singular and possessive forms: 'Childs' is not a valid plural (children is irregular plural), 'child' is singular, and 'children's' is the possessive form, not plural. Also 'a bicycle' with 'many' should be plural 'bicycles' or omitted. Use the irregular plural 'children' and plural 'bicycles' to match 'many'. Suggestion: learn irregular plural forms (child -> children) and ensure noun number matches quantifiers like 'many'.