Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear, direct answer first and then add one or two concise supporting details. Avoid repeating the examiner's question and correct obvious mistakes (e.g., word choice). Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences. Use linking words like "when" or "so" to make it coherent.

예시: Yes. I had a small tricycle when I was a child, and I used to ride it with my friends after school. We would often stop at the corner shop to buy snacks, so those rides are one of my fondest memories.

제안: Start with a direct opinion about popularity, then support it with a specific example. Avoid filler phrases ("you know", "like") and self-corrections. Use linking words such as "because" or "for example" to connect your points. Keep to a maximum of 4 sentences and choose accurate verbs ("ride" not "drive").

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, when I was growing up I had a tricycle and my friends and I would ride to the shop after school to buy snacks, which we did almost every day.

× While I was growing up, my I remember that tricycle my bubble got me.

✓ While I was growing up, I remember that my uncle bought me a tricycle.

The original sentence has mixed tenses and word order problems. 'While I was growing up' sets a past continuous context, so 'I remember' can remain present but sounds odd with the rest; using 'I remember that' plus a past simple clause requires correct word order and past verb: 'my uncle bought me a tricycle.' Also 'my bubble' is likely a mispronunciation; replace with intended noun. Suggestion: keep consistent tense and correct word order: 'I remember that my uncle bought me a tricycle.'

× I would drive it, sorry.

✓ I would ride it, sorry.

The verb 'drive' is not appropriate for a tricycle; 'ride' is the correct verb for bicycles/tricycles. 'Would' here describes habitual past action and is correct; only verb choice needed changing.

× I would ride it in the street after school along with my school friends and we would just, you know, go by our day, enjoy.

✓ I would ride it in the street after school with my school friends and we would just, you know, go about our day and enjoy ourselves.

'Along with' is acceptable but 'with' is more natural. 'Go by our day' is incorrect collocation; the correct expression is 'go about our day.' Also 'enjoy' needs an object or reflexive pronoun: 'enjoy ourselves.' This preserves the habitual past meaning using 'would.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present simple appropriately to ask about a general truth or current situation, so no correction is needed.

× We would go to the shop and like get chocolates and snacks.

✓ We would go to the shop and get chocolates and snacks.

The filler 'like' is informal and unnecessary in this sentence. Removing it improves sentence structure and formality while preserving the past habitual meaning expressed by 'would.'