Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details (where you rode it, how often, or a memory). Keep answers natural and within 1–3 sentences. Use linking words like “and” or “often” to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a blue bike when I was about seven. I used to ride it to the park almost every afternoon, and I remember learning to balance without training wheels over the summer.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, then add specific supporting details and a linking phrase for clarity. Avoid repeating words (e.g., “popular” twice in succession) and use comparative language smoothly. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and add a brief reason or example.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular, especially in big cities. However, they aren’t as widespread as in the Netherlands because our infrastructure for cycling—like dedicated bike lanes—is less developed.

× Yes, I yes, I had a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The original sentence repeats 'I' and 'yes', causing redundancy and disrupting sentence structure. Remove the extra words so the response is a clear simple past statement that matches the examiner's past-tense question. Suggestion: keep responses concise, e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Yes, for sure they are popular.

✓ Yes, they are definitely popular.

The phrase 'for sure they are popular' has awkward word order and informal phrasing. Reordering and using 'definitely' produces a natural affirmative statement. Maintain present-tense 'are' to match general fact.

× Popular mostly in the big cities, but they are not as popular as they are for example in the Netherlands.

✓ They are mostly popular in the big cities, but they are not as popular there as, for example, in the Netherlands.

The original sentence omits a subject at the start and misplaces 'mostly'. It also repeats 'they are' unnecessarily and uses 'as they are for example in the Netherlands' which is awkward. Corrections: add subject 'They' at the beginning, place 'mostly' before 'popular', replace the repeated clause with 'not as popular there as, for example, in the Netherlands' to compare popularity correctly. Also add commas for clarity.