Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and complete. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one brief supporting detail. Avoid unnecessary auxiliary words. For example, say whether you enjoyed it or how often you used it and use a linking word if adding detail.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about eight, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

제안: Reduce hesitation and repetition, and organise ideas with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) and provide one or two concrete reasons or examples. Keep the answer to no more than four sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in the Philippines because traffic is often heavy, so many people use bicycles as a faster, cheaper way to get around. For instance, commuters in cities often cycle short distances to avoid congestion and save on transport costs.

× Yes, I did have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student used 'did have' which is unnecessary in short responses. For simple past questions, the correct short answer uses the auxiliary verb only: 'Yes, I did.' Use 'did' alone to indicate past tense; 'have' is redundant here.

× Yes, it's quite uh, popular in the Philippines because, umm, it's quite uh, the, the traffic there is quite heavy.

✓ Yes, it's quite popular in the Philippines because the traffic there is quite heavy.

Extra fillers and repetition ('quite uh, the, the') disrupt sentence flow. The subject 'traffic' is singular and correctly takes 'is'; remove duplicates and fillers to maintain subject-verb agreement and clarity. Be concise: 'it's quite popular' and 'the traffic there is quite heavy.'

× So people tend to think of an alternative when it comes to the mode of transportation.

✓ So people tend to think of alternatives when it comes to modes of transportation.

'An alternative' and 'the mode of transportation' create awkward singular constructions when referring to a general habit. Use plural 'alternatives' and 'modes of transportation' for general statements. This improves noun number consistency and naturalness.

× So having a bike is like almost a must if you're gonna go somewhere.

✓ So having a bike is almost a must if you're going to go somewhere.

'Gonna' is informal; use 'going to' in a test context. 'Like almost a must' is colloquial and redundant; 'almost a must' is clearer. Also remove 'like' which is filler. The definite article use is fine, but wording and register should be corrected for clarity and formality.