Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, accuracy and clarity. Start with a direct topic sentence in the past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g. 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child'). Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my neighbour's bicycle to ride to the park on weekends, which helped me learn balance quickly. As a result, I became comfortable cycling and now I ride regularly for short trips.

제안: Improve grammar, word choice and coherence. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons and an example using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'for instance'). Use correct nouns and adjectives (e.g. 'bikes are an important form of transport' and 'time-saving'). Keep answers concise and natural.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and time-saving way to travel. For example, many people use motorcycles to avoid traffic during rush hour, which helps them get to work faster. In addition, bikes are cheap to run and easy to park, so they suit short city journeys.

× I don't have a bike when I'm child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence mixes present-tense 'don't have' with a past time reference 'when I'm child'. The context is asking about the past (childhood), so use the simple past 'didn't have'. Also the phrase 'I'm child' is incorrect; it should be 'I was a child' or 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past-time statements: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, biker very important transport in our country because bike is a very beneficial for the time sake.

✓ Yes, bicycles are a very important means of transport in our country because bikes are very time-efficient.

Multiple issues: 'biker' refers to a person, not the object; use 'bicycles' or 'bikes'. The sentence lacks the verb 'are' after subject, so include 'are' for plural subject agreement. 'Transport' as a countable/uncountable noun is better expressed as 'means of transport'. The phrase 'beneficial for the time sake' is ungrammatical; a clearer expression is 'time-efficient' or 'save time'. Ensure plural agreement: 'bicycles/bikes are'. Suggestion: rephrase to 'Yes, bicycles are a very important means of transport in our country because bikes are very time-efficient.'