Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Fix tense and grammar, give a direct topic sentence and add one brief supporting detail. Keep it natural and concise (max 3–4 short sentences). Use past tense for childhood and avoid redundancy.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or took a bus. I remember sometimes borrowing a neighbour’s bike to ride in the park.

제안: Make a clear topic sentence, use linking words and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, avoid filler sounds). Provide one or two specific reasons or examples and finish logically. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many young people prefer them because they are cheap to run and help avoid traffic jams. For example, commuters often use motorcycles to get through congested city streets quickly.

× No, I don't have any bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple ('don't have') with a past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use past simple 'didn't have' for past situations. Also use 'a bike' (singular count noun with article) rather than 'any bike' in a negative past simple statement: 'I didn't have a bike.' Suggestion: use past tense consistently and include the indefinite article for singular countable nouns.

× Yes. I think bikes are more popular in my country uh, because most of the youngsters use uh bikes they loves to ride.

✓ Yes. I think bikes are very popular in my country because most youngsters use bikes and love to ride them.

Multiple issues: 'are more popular' implies a comparison without a reference; use 'are popular' or 'very popular'. 'Most of the youngsters' is acceptable but 'most youngsters' is more natural. 'Use bikes they loves' mixes plural subject with singular verb 'loves' — subject-verb agreement error (third person). Also pronoun and connector issues: add 'and' to join clauses and use 'love' for plural subject and 'them' to refer back to 'bikes'. Suggestion: keep consistent present simple for general statements, use plural verb forms with plural subjects, and add conjunctions/pronouns for clarity.

× So even for a convenient ride, I prefer a bike uh, most of the time there will be a traffic conjunction, so.

✓ So even for a convenient ride I prefer a bike. Most of the time there is a traffic congestion.

This sentence has several problems: 'there will be' is future tense but the speaker is making a general statement, so present 'there is' (or 'there often is') is better. 'Traffic conjunction' is incorrect word choice; the correct noun is 'traffic congestion'. Also the original run-on should be split into two sentences. Suggestion: use present tense for habitual situations, choose correct vocabulary ('congestion'), and separate ideas into clear sentences.