Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response grammatically correct, more natural, and include a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Use past tense for childhood, avoid awkward phrases like "the help of which," and give a brief specific detail (where or how you used it). Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child, and I used it to ride around my village every day. It was very useful for visiting friends and going to the market, and I learned to ride it when I was about seven.

제안: Answer directly and use clearer vocabulary and grammar. Explain what type of bikes are popular and why, using linking words to add one specific reason or example. Avoid confusing phrasing like "many boys which are popular" and name types correctly (motorbikes, models). Keep to one to three sentences.

예시: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people ride models like the Honda 125 because they are affordable and fuel-efficient for daily travel, especially in crowded cities.

× Yeah, I have a bike in my childhood and the help of which I ride in my village town.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike in my childhood, and with its help I rode around my village town.

The original sentence mixes present tense 'have' with the past time phrase 'in my childhood'; use past tense 'had'. Also 'the help of which' is an awkward relative construction; use 'with its help' and change 'ride' to past 'rode' to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent with time adverbials (use past for past time) and use natural prepositional/relative phrasing (e.g., 'with its help', 'rode around'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yeah, there are many boys which are popular in my country, such as Honda 125.

✓ Yeah, many bikes are popular in my country, such as the Honda 125.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'boys' instead of 'bikes' and uses 'which' to refer to people/things awkwardly. Also 'are popular' is fine but the subject should be 'bikes'. Replace 'boys' with 'bikes' and use the article with the model name 'the Honda 125'. Use 'which' only for clauses; here it's unnecessary. Suggestion: choose correct noun and use articles appropriately (e.g., 'the Honda 125'). Grammar problem type ID:12