Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep the answer in past tense, make it concise, and fix grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason using linking words. Avoid repetition and long incorrect clauses.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents were worried because I didn’t know how to ride, so they preferred to wait until I was older and more confident.

제안: Answer directly, use correct vocabulary and clear linking words. Give one or two specific examples and avoid unclear phrases. Keep to a maximum of about 3–4 sentences and correct pronunciation/word choice like 'bikes' not 'Bipes'.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people ride along Beach Road in the evenings, and there are lots of different models from scooters to mountain bikes. Because they are affordable and convenient for short trips, cycling is a common choice.

× No, I did not have a bike when I am a child because my mother and father are afraid to buy me a bike because I don't, I does not know how to ride it.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my mother and father were afraid to buy me one because I did not know how to ride it.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses. 'When I am a child' should be past: 'when I was a child'. 'Are afraid' should be past: 'were afraid'. 'I don't, I does not know' is incorrect: use past simple 'I did not know'. Also use 'one' instead of repeating 'a bike' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: keep all verbs in past tense when talking about childhood experiences and use consistent negative forms ('did not').

× It's of course the Bipes are popular in our country because at the night outs the people over Beach Rd. will ride and go for a ride on a bike with different models of bikes.

✓ Of course bikes are popular in our country because in the evenings people along Beach Rd. ride different models of bike.

The sentence uses incorrect article and word forms: 'It's of course the Bipes' is wrong—omit 'the' and correct spelling 'bikes'. 'At the night outs' is unidiomatic; use 'in the evenings'. 'The people over Beach Rd.' should be 'people along Beach Rd.' Also avoid repeating 'ride' and 'on a bike with different models of bikes'—use 'ride different models of bike' or 'ride bikes of different models'. Ensure natural article use and correct nouns.

× So the bikes are most popular in our country.

✓ So bikes are very popular in our country.

Use of definite article 'the bikes' is unnecessary when making a general statement; use 'bikes are very popular'. 'Most popular' implies comparison among many options; 'very popular' is more natural if you mean generally common. Also keep present simple for general facts.