Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and use correct tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetitive phrases and incorrect auxiliary verbs (use past tense: 'took', 'we cycled').

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother often took my sister and me to the park, where we cycled along the paths for fun and sometimes practised small races. Those outings were a regular weekend activity and helped me become confident riding on roads.

제안: Give a direct opinion, then support it with clear, specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitations and fix grammar (use 'are' + plural nouns; avoid 'there are have'). Mention examples or comparisons to strengthen the answer.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. This is because we have extensive public transport such as buses and the MRT, which many people prefer for convenience. For example, commuting by MRT is often faster and safer than cycling in busy city areas.

× When I was a child, my mom will take me and my sister to go to the garden and have a little bit jogging and we'll bring our bike to have a like cycling there and have fun there.

✓ When I was a child, my mom would take my sister and me to the park to do a little jogging, and we would bring our bikes to ride and have fun there.

The original sentence uses 'will' to describe habitual actions in the past; English uses 'would' or 'used to' for repeated past actions (modal verb usage). Also correct word order for objects: 'my sister and me' and plural 'bikes' for more than one. 'Garden' is better as 'park' in this context and 'have a like cycling' is ungrammatical so replaced with 'ride'. Suggestions: use 'would' or 'used to' for habitual past, use plural nouns when appropriate, and simplify phrases (e.g., 'ride and have fun').

× Hmm, good question for currently I don't think that bike are popular in my country because there are have more, uh, public transport like bus, uh, MRTRT in my country.

✓ Hmm, good question. Currently I don't think that bikes are popular in my country because there are more public transport options like buses and the MRT in my country.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement and noun number errors: 'bike are' should be 'bikes are' (plural subject with plural verb) and 'there are have more' is ungrammatical; use 'there are more' or 'we have more'. Also 'bus' should be plural 'buses' when speaking generally, and 'MRTRT' likely refers to 'MRT'. Suggestions: ensure noun number matches verbs, use correct existential construction 'there are' without 'have', and use correct names for transport systems.