Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g. "student" twice) and correct article and plural usage.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle throughout my childhood and used it to get to school and visit friends. For example, when I was in elementary and junior high school, I often rode three kilometers each way to school, which was faster than walking.

제안: Provide a complete, grammatically correct response with clear structure. Start with a direct opinion, then give specific reasons and use linking words (e.g. "however", "because", "for example"). Finish the sentence—avoid trailing off. Use correct verb forms and articles.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular overall; however, it depends on the city. In smaller towns and suburbs people often cycle because it's cheap and practical, but in large busy cities many prefer walking or public transport due to heavy traffic and limited bike lanes.

× I went to a lot of place by bicycle, especially when I was a student in elementary school and junior high school student.

✓ I went to a lot of places by bicycle, especially when I was a student in elementary school and junior high school.

The noun 'place' should be plural ('places') because 'a lot of' requires a plural count noun. Also 'student' is redundant after 'junior high school'; remove the second 'student' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: use 'a lot of places' and avoid repeating roles already stated. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I think so, but actually it's depends on city too because if it's busy city maybe it's more convenient by walking but in.

✓ I think so, but actually it depends on the city too, because if it is a busy city it may be more convenient to walk.

The contraction 'it's' plus verb 'depends' is incorrect; use 'it depends' (subject 'it' + verb 'depends'). 'City' needs a determiner: use 'the city' or 'a busy city'. 'Maybe it's more convenient by walking' is ungrammatical; use 'it may be more convenient to walk' or 'to go on foot.' Remove the trailing 'but in.' Suggestions: use correct subject-verb form, include articles with countable nouns, and use 'to' + base verb for expressing convenience. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I think so, but actually it's depends on city too because if it's busy city maybe it's more convenient by walking but in.

✓ I think so, but actually it depends on the city too, because if it is a busy city it may be more convenient to walk.

The verb 'depends' should follow the subject 'it' without contraction error: 'it depends' (third person singular present). Using 'it's depends' is wrong because 'it's' is 'it is' and cannot be followed by another verb in that way. Suggestion: use 'it depends' for correct third person singular present tense. Grammar problem type ID: 2