Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve tense accuracy, natural phrasing, and expand slightly with one supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood, avoid 'any' with singular countable noun, and add a brief reason or context. Keep it under five sentences and start with a clear topic sentence.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or used public transport.

제안: Make the sentence concise and accurate, avoid filler words and repetitions, use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), and give a clearer statistic or simple example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and keep to a maximum of five sentences.

예시: In my opinion, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for daily commuting. For example, about three out of five people I know own a bike and ride it to work or school because it’s cheap and convenient.

× No, I don't have any bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense; use 'didn't have'. Also, 'any bike' is unnatural here: countable singular nouns with 'any' in negative past usually use 'a' omitted; 'a bike' or 'any bikes' are possible. Suggestion: say 'No, I didn't have a bike.'

× In in my opinion bikes are popular in my country because out of three out of three persons out of five owns a bike and use as a daily uh in daily vehicle.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country because three out of five people own a bike and use it as a daily vehicle.

Multiple issues corrected that match the provided list: remove repeated word 'In in' (sentence structure), add comma after 'In my opinion' (sentence flow), change 'persons' to 'people' (more natural noun choice), correct 'out of three out of three persons out of five' to a single clear ratio 'three out of five', fix subject-verb agreement: 'people own' (plural subject with plural verb) instead of 'owns', add object pronoun 'it' for 'use it as a daily vehicle', and remove filler 'uh'. Also corrected article use: 'a bike' is correct. Suggestion: practice forming clear ratios ('three out of five people') and ensure verb agrees with the subject ('people own').