Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, give a clear topic sentence then one or two brief supporting details (when you got it, how you used it, a short memory). Use correct tense and singular/plural forms and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I did. I received my first bike when I was in the third year of primary school, and I used to ride it to visit friends and practice in the park every afternoon. I remember being very proud because it had a bright red frame and a bell that I loved.

제안: Start with a clear direct opinion, then support it with specific reasons and one brief example or comparison. Use linking words (for example, because, however) to make the answer coherent and expand just enough without repeating the same idea.

예시: Not really — I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes and cars for convenience and speed. For example, during rush hour you rarely see bicycles on main roads, and many families find cars more practical for carrying children or shopping.

× I got the bike when I was in third years in the primary school.

✓ I got the bike when I was in third year in primary school.

The phrase 'third years' incorrectly uses the plural form for a singular grade. Use 'third year' to indicate a single year level. Also 'in the primary school' is awkward; 'in primary school' is more natural. Suggestion: say 'when I was in third year in primary school.'

× No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because many people use motorbike and car.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because many people use motorbikes and cars.

The nouns 'motorbike' and 'car' are singular but refer to general categories; use plural 'motorbikes' and 'cars' after 'many people use'. This is a quantifier/context issue: 'many' requires a plural count noun. Also you could say 'motorcycles and cars' for naturalness.